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Post by Bx on Dec 31, 2007 4:17:16 GMT -5
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Post by Rhonoc on Dec 31, 2007 4:28:02 GMT -5
I'll be completely honest with you...
I DIDN'T UNDERSTAND S*** ABOUT THIS COMIC. I DIDN'T GET THE PLOT.
Also the frames were actually really not smooth. Like at one point Someone stand here and on the next he is there already doing some cool moves. Also like in the first part there is Nova attacking, the next he is down already, what happened, dunno. also then he is already helping you. You should explain more, what happened, why it happened etc.
Make the fighting scenes also more smooth. It's really hard to know what someone does.
So thats all for my criticism.
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Post by Bx on Dec 31, 2007 5:26:03 GMT -5
I'll try to clear it out to you.............maybe some other time
I'm still thinking if I should make a Reminiscence
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Post by Bx on Dec 31, 2007 5:27:46 GMT -5
oh right look in Outbreak Zero Forums or in SFZNSP to know it's Plot
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Post by Bloodbane on Jan 1, 2008 4:57:47 GMT -5
I -kinda- understood the plot.... But then it all goes downhill from there. The grammar isn't great by any means, and there's so many different bittages it ain't funny. I'll admit, You sorta made the style mixing work.... Sorta. I'll also admit these are much better than the MMBN comics of utter random at ZV.... but you need to work on the things Rhonoc said, and you also need to try to work harder at using good grammar in the comics.
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Post by Bx on Jan 1, 2008 5:41:39 GMT -5
it's hard to make good comics if you lots of things to do but probably you already know that ,so that is my feedback to you
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