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Post by Rhonoc on May 13, 2008 8:34:36 GMT -5
The chest lacks shading. But still nice try. You tried to get rid of the boobs.
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Post by Nova on May 14, 2008 9:33:36 GMT -5
Now we're getting somewhere. Ron is right, give the chest some shading. I also suggest more contrast in the red, it's almost all one color. Lastly, change the shoulders and helmet Maybe something similar to your previous post.
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Post by Rick on May 21, 2008 14:52:34 GMT -5
k for this one i shaded the chest and added some cheap stuff. for this one i made a scratch body with no arm and head.
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Post by Rhonoc on May 22, 2008 7:14:25 GMT -5
The edited one looks better. On the scratch one, the body part goes up too straight. When you stand, it usually isn't so straight. And are the pants supposed to be cameo pants(those soldier pants), if so, then its ok, but if not, then it has too many colors of green and has too many wrinkles (I know i have them too, but I can't help it). Other than those things, it looks really good.
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Post by Rick on Aug 25, 2008 1:45:57 GMT -5
something i made during the long boring summerand its almost done...
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Post by Rhonoc on Aug 25, 2008 8:31:04 GMT -5
Don't you think that the legs are too big for the body? Thats what my eyes tell me. But i have bad vision. Keep u the good work.
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