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Post by Nova on Jul 15, 2007 9:28:33 GMT -5
Same for what I said at OBZ. The right arm looks disconnected from the body. Erase or lighten some of the colors on the shoulder and bring it closer to the body. Still an awesome sprite neither-the-less.
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Post by Rhonoc on Jul 15, 2007 9:45:30 GMT -5
Forgot to add this before. Presenting : Sikrix Ookami Rhonoc's girlfriend ( Every cool guy has to have a girlfriend ). Scratch except for the head, what made Lizzy. Going to edit it later on. But the body is scratch. Bio will be made later and it will be found alongside Rhonoc's bio. @nova : I'll see what i can do about Rhonoc's arm.
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Post by Nova on Jul 15, 2007 11:38:34 GMT -5
She looks very good. Especially for a scratch. You're gonna need someone else who's better with female anatomy to give you a good C+C <<;
*Steals Rhonoc's Girlfriend*
>>;
Aisu: Hey >=(
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Post by Rhonoc on Jul 15, 2007 11:45:27 GMT -5
Rhonoc: Don't cheat on yours and especially with mine.*Draws his blade out*
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Post by Rhonoc on Jul 16, 2007 3:19:41 GMT -5
Update! Edited the shoes and the leg cloth. But i don't know how to edit HER right legs upper part, so it could be smoother. I tried editing it, but all of the tries didn't come out good.
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Post by Nova on Jul 16, 2007 10:54:36 GMT -5
Sorry, I don't know what you could do. Once again, ask someone who is better with female anatomy.
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Post by Rhonoc on Jul 22, 2007 2:24:45 GMT -5
Two new poses. Scratch. Any comments?
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Post by Rhonoc on Jul 23, 2007 5:53:29 GMT -5
Update! Edited Rhonoc again.
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Post by Rhonoc on Jul 29, 2007 1:49:29 GMT -5
Edited it. alternate standing pose.
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Post by Rhonoc on Aug 4, 2007 12:53:12 GMT -5
Edited the folds on the pants and tweaked the red contrast a little. Also I made the end of the coat not so diagonal, but now i think i made it a little too much again.
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Post by Nova on Aug 4, 2007 16:14:28 GMT -5
Too...many...wrinkles. Really X/
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Post by Rhonoc on Aug 25, 2007 12:12:35 GMT -5
Did a total Revamp on Sikrix. Made her from scratch and to prove it made the hole thing shown, how did i do it, exept for the head. the head was edited off of Lizzy PD female heads.
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Post by Nova on Aug 25, 2007 13:45:36 GMT -5
Look who has been improving. There is too much white on the pants, which makes them kinda difficult to make out. The legs are way to thick and her right(our left) leg is bent out in a odd way. I see you tried to give her heels aswell, raise the hight of the heel by a few pixels. Also add a darker color to the center of the legs to seperate them because they look fused together. Lastly, her right breast(Our left) doesn't look right in shape and actually seems smaller than the left breast. I gotta say though that you've gone up a notch since you last updated. Keep up the good work Rhonoc. b^^d
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Post by Rhonoc on Aug 26, 2007 1:24:42 GMT -5
Thanks Nova, I'll get right on fixing her. I've been trying. The part where there was too much white, they aren't pants, it's a skirt. Just to clarify it. Forgot to add these yesterday.
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Post by Rhonoc on Oct 4, 2007 7:46:58 GMT -5
It's been a long time since i updated. I made the Dragon Control sprite for Rhonoc. Currently I'm working on Sikrix too. So, Comment it please and critisize.
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Post by Nova on Oct 4, 2007 18:57:46 GMT -5
It's alittle difficult to make out but it looks like a claw or something. If so, you should make the white a grey instead. That's about all I can think of atm, so I think you should go with your own judgement on it.
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Post by Rhonoc on Oct 5, 2007 7:38:26 GMT -5
It's like the hole arm changed in to a claw. and the spikeye parts are made of black diamond, so thats why the sharp parts are white.
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Post by Rhonoc on Oct 8, 2007 7:46:55 GMT -5
UPDATE! Did a total revamp on Sikrix again. Comment and critisize it.
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Post by Shiiro on Oct 27, 2007 22:46:57 GMT -5
WHY does her ears look big
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Post by Rhonoc on Oct 28, 2007 1:09:06 GMT -5
Because she is a half-elf. and elves have long ears.
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Post by Nova on Oct 30, 2007 10:14:47 GMT -5
Her left leg where the flesh is showing seems alittle fat. Try trimming it by a few pixels Ron. Otherwise, there really isn't much wrong with it.
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Post by Rhonoc on Nov 4, 2007 8:04:10 GMT -5
Ok sorry for not being able to post here. I was on vacation with my parents. Now i got more wanting to sprite. i will fix it as soon as i can. and also do your request and widen the sprite sheet.
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Post by Rhonoc on Dec 29, 2007 3:18:02 GMT -5
LOL!! I made a duover of Rhonoc again. I have lost count on how many revamps i have done on him. So here he is. C+C please. P.S. I think I'll start spriting again.
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Post by Bx on Dec 29, 2007 7:40:04 GMT -5
It's been a long time since i updated. I made the Dragon Control sprite for Rhonoc. Currently I'm working on Sikrix too. So, Comment it please and critisize. he's like Krauser
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Post by Rhonoc on Dec 29, 2007 11:04:43 GMT -5
who?
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